Methods

  • General: Methods do not state which tests were used. Recommend adding a brief statement about what statistical methods were used (eg, chi-square, multivariable logistic regression).

  • General: Were cancer stage, insurance status, or site of care included as covariates for this health equity analysis?

  • Line 14-15: Where is this multihospital health system generally located?

  • Line 22-23: “Among tested patients, 113 had recorded germline results.” The abstract states, “164 (40.7%) completed germline testing” but “113 had recorded germline results” is presented ambiguously. Reviewers suggest modifying the Methods to state: “Of 164 tested patients, results were recorded for 113,” making the denominator explicit.

  • Line 22-23: Reviewers also ask the author to consider adding one sentence explaining why 51 tested patients (31%) lack recorded results (164->113).

  • Line 26-28: The multivariable finding states, “male sex and other race were independently associated with lower odds of testing completion” but does not include numbers. The word limit for abstracts submitted to GMR is 500 words, so reviewers encourage the author to add adjusted odds ratios with 95% CIs (and ideally P values) for male sex and other race.

Results

  • Line 26: Reviewers request clarification of the term “other race.” Is this a defined census-style category or a residual/heterogeneous group in the study? An independent association with a potentially poorly defined “other” category is difficult to interpret.

Conclusion

  • Line 30-31: Recommend modifying “Standardized hereditary evaluation workflows may improve testing completion and equity” to “Standardized timing of testing relative to diagnosis” for clarity.