Introduction

Minor comments:

  • Line 6: This frames the study specifically around familial adenomatous polyposis while the Methods include both familial and attenuated adenomatous polyposis. It would be helpful to describe the study population more clearly.

Materials & Methods

Major comments:

  • Line 9-10: Abstract states that surveillance patterns would be characterized, but there were no mentions in the Results section of the overall performance of gastric dysplasia detection and tracking. The authors only stated the patients who had a follow up. To address this, a descriptive evaluation of the upper endoscopy surveillance’s sensitivity, efficacy, overutilization, underutilization, or attrition rate should be included in the Results section. If the goal of the authors was not to characterize these patterns, then please remove the statement “surveillance patterns” from the Objective.

  • Line 13: How patients were identified and subsequently determined to have familial adenomatous polyposis was somewhat confusing. Consider briefly clarifying the patient identification process about what search strategy generated the initial group and what criteria were used to confirm familial or attenuated adenomatous polyposis.

Minor comments:

  • Line 13: Consider specifying whether familial vs attenuated adenomatous polyposis were analyzed together or individually.

Results

Minor comments:

  • Line 25: Clarify the number of patients remaining under follow-up: Did all 93 patients contribute to the estimated cumulative incidence at 10 years?

  • Line 27: Specify what statistical analysis was performed to support the conclusion that gastric dysplasia was strongly associated with gastric polyp presence.